Analysis of Persuasive paper

In my Persuasive paper I made the claim that God can exist as a Theory of science. Since it was introduced as a theory it was not so much about proving it as getting the reader to see that it was possible.To do this I denounced several misnomers about the Old testament. I chose the old testament because it is the area that goes over God more than the Messiah or lack thereof. The first thing I had to do was point out that "many of the stories in the old testaments are myth and second hand" I continued on by pointing out that Jonah's story could be one that was and exaggeration with, "If he was in the great fish how could Jonah known how long he was in the great fish." The next thing I had to do was get rid of the main barrier, creationism. I shortly did this by pointing out that this story was written a thousand years after Adam and Eve.