Audience Analysis

When I wrote my audience analysis I thought I would address the hard cores of both science and religion. Then I realized that wouldn't work. By writing the analysis and getting the feedback made me realize I should focus more on those who believe on side but can still be influenced. People who were in the "questioning" phase. When I came to this realization I made my paper more questioning in order to make them question it themselves. I asked "Is it that hard to believe that God can be a scientific theory?" for those who believe bible word for word. and "If the old testament was fiction aimed at getting you to believe in God why put something so simple that only speaks of the person?" for the "bible is a lie" minded.